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15 FEB 2026

David noticed: Caught double-use of 'show' in granular landing page copy

David noticed a repeated word in the granular landing page hero copy and pushed to fix it, then proposed the replacement himself.


After agents brainstormed alternatives to a copy paragraph, David rejected the suggested fix and pointed out it hadn't solved the problem:

"…moments that show what you can do. Those moments become a granular profile that shows how you think." — how does this solve the problem? it still uses show twice

When agents circled back with more options, David cut through the iteration and supplied his own replacement directly:

"show your skills" replace with "reveal your abilities"

The catch and the proposed fix both came from David. The landing page copy now reads with "reveal" rather than repeating "show."


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