David noticed:David rejected performative-pithy prose in the deck
Reviewing draft after draft of the pitch deck, David repeatedly called out a specific failure mode in AI-written copy: short, declarative sentences strung together to seem profound. He wrote 'this is the type of poetic prose i hate. i want the deck to be boring and clear ... boring is cool', then later caught the AI overcorrecting into needlessly long sentences and pushed back again. He also asked the AI to audit the deck for AI-sounding fluff, naming as an example the claim that Granular is 'no